I can smile forever now - cutting a slit mouth

Whats the first thing you notice? The first thing I noticed was your hair, and then the "cuts" in the second image. Really my eyes went from left to right automatically. Your hair I noticed, because it is bright and colorful, and the cuts because well.. I mean look at them xD

What do you like the most? Probably your hair, and I like the cuts on the second image. Your hair because it's pretty and colorful, and the cuts because they look pretty real, just maybe take away some of the white that is in it, around the edges. I also really like your make up. Maybe make it a bit darker next time?

The least? The black frame, the not so great quality of the images, and your name on the image. Could do without and I think it would make a better impression.

:What could make it better? No black frame, no name, and no black around the images (I've noticed you do that alot, and I think it takes away from all of your photos) Also, maybe a bit more of a.. scared expression. Because you don't look scared, you look.. I can't even explain it lol

Whats the first thing you thought when you saw this? Well that's kinda cool. She has nice hair..

Vision? Vision.. Well it's not very pleasing to the eye, not any of the colors flow, and that black around it is really annoying. So I guess I would give it a

Orginality Originality.. I'm pretty sure this is pretty original. I've never really seen it done before lol. So..

Technique Technique.. needs quite a bit of work. There is so many ways you could execution this that would be so much better.

Impact Impact, not really much of an impact either, sadly. I probably won't remember this image later.

Overall, you're a pretty girl, you have nice hair, I like the hair and the cuts. Make up could be darker, the cuts a bit better, no black around it, or your name.
and a half overall.